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The breeze blew through the trees, making the leaves sway with its passing. It continued on its path, flowing into the only open window in Ponyville's hospital, and gently caressed the heads of the slumbering ponies.

Unused to sleeping with open windows, Applejack found herself waking up thanks to the airborne disturbance. She blinked slowly, lifting her head off of her forelegs, and took stock of her surroundings. Sometime during the night, her head had shifted away from Rainbow's, ending on her outstretched legs that she had clearly used as a somewhat uncomfortable pillow. Rainbow Dash, on the other hoof, had been robbed of Applejack's neck as a support, and had shifted as well. Applejack could only smile as she looked at the slumbering pegasus, her blue head resting on Applejack's back, completely tucked under a wing like a feathered blanket.

Applejack yawned, attempting to clear the cobwebs from her brain, and thought back to the previous night. It had been draining, both physically and emotionally. She once again had to admire Rainbow Dash, for having the energy to fly as much as she did. Applejack prided herself on her stamina, but that flight had still considerably winded her, and it was at nowhere near the speed or distance that Rainbow regularly did.

The emotional drain, however, had been greater. She thought about Dash, and how she had laid her heart out for Applejack to see. Even though Rainbow had thought Applejack was only a dream, the words had still poured out of her, baring her thoughts to the one she... loved.

Love. Applejack repeated to herself. Rainbow had said it several times. But had Applejack? As she ran the conversation through her mind again, she found that she hadn't. Or at least, not exactly. Her body had moved on its own, moving forward when Rainbow had tried to launch herself at Applejack, and when she had leaned in to deepen the kiss. She hadn't thought, but simply... acted. Even if she hadn't said the words, she'd been honest with herself. That had to count for something.

Her inner musings paused as she felt Rainbow shift beside her. The still slumbering mare seemed to be nestling closer to Applejack's body, and was in fact... cuddling. Applejack grinned, shaking her head in amazement. "Ah never pegged you as a cuddlebug, Dash..."

"Wazzat, AJ?" Rainbow replied, somehow hearing Applejack while remaining asleep. "Birthday present? … Soarin and Spitfire?" She mumbled, grinning slyly as she cuddled closer to the farmpony. "You shouldn't have!"

Applejack raised a questioning eyebrow. "... Ah'm gonna assume this is just cuddlin', at least." She then froze when Rainbow's cuddling became something... different. She felt a tongue on her neck, licking her happily, then felt an ear become trapped by Rainbow's teeth. "Ack! Dash! Get offa me!" She exclaimed, trying to push Rainbow away while at the same time attempting to not wake her up. "Ah'm pretty sure this is a marriage proposal in some places!"

The demand seemed to get through to Rainbow, who stopped nibbling Applejack's ear. Instead, she turned her face towards Applejack's, and cracked an eye open. "Gotcha." Rainbow whispered, grinning. The grin faded as Applejack started glaring at her. "S-sorry... it's just a joke." She said, her ears flat on her head.

"Is it now?" Applejack asked, as she leaned closer to Rainbow face until their foreheads were touching. "Only if you want it to be, Dashie." She said, leering suggestively.

Rainbow Dash's mouth fell open as the gears in her head spun frantically, and she sputtered incoherently for a moment before her brain caught up with the world. She then noticed the cheeky grin Applejack was sporting. "... You win." She admitted, her eyes still wide open.

"'Course Ah do." Applejack replied, fluttering her wings to get a few kinks out of them. The motion caught Rainbow's eyes, reminding her of something she'd heard last night.

"Hey, AJ..." She asked, giving the orange pony a look. "Did you fly? I thought I heard the nurse say something about that last night..."

"Hm? Oh, Ah guess Ah found myself in the air when she startled us..." Applejack answered, a slight blush on her cheeks.

"That's awesome!" The pegasus gushed, grinning widely. "How did real flying feel like?"

"Ah can see why you love it, Sugarcube... It felt amazin' soaring over the apple trees. Mighty tirin' flyin' that long though..."

"Wait wait..." Rainbow said, holding up her good hoof. "You flew from the Acres? Not glided, but flew?"

Applejack nodded, wondering why Rainbow Dash was getting so excited. Flight was flight, wasn't it? "Yeah? Why, what about it?"

"What about it?!" Rainbow repeated, staring at the farmpony. "Applejack, that's an incredible first flight. Last time I saw you, you were still gliding!" Rainbow said as she continued to stare.

Applejack felt her cheeks coloring under Rainbow's gaze. "Aw shucks. Ah didn't realise it was such a big deal... it just clicked, Ah guess."

"Big deal?" Rainbow almost shouted. "It's a huge deal! You're a natural at this."

"Really?" Applejack grinned. "Well then, how 'bout you take care of the farm, and Ah join the Wonderbolts?" She joked, poking Rainbow in the side.

"H-hey!" The pegasus replied, her ears dropping slightly as her mood took a sudden nosedive. Applejack noticed immediately, and put a hoof on Rainbow's shoulder.

"Ah'm sorry, Sugarcube. That was thoughtless of me..." She apologized, before a knocking interrupted her. Both ponies looked at the door, where they found a unicorn mare wearing a white doctor's coat.

"I'm sorry to interrupt." She said, nodding to the pair. "I'm Doctor Saddlebags. I'm the staff psychologist at the hospital, and I'm just here on a routine post-accident checkup. If I could take a few minutes of your time?"

Rainbow frowned at her, and looked away with a sullen look on her face. She didn't feel like dealing with anyone else at that moment.

Doctor Saddlebags smiled gently, not letting such a reaction hold her back. "I'm glad to see you're feeling better. Although..." She paused, her smile turning into a grin. "I don't think you'll be applebucking anytime soon."

Rainbow's head spun back towards the doctor, and stared at her angrily. "You were snooping around? Well take your saddlebags and shove them up your-"

"Dash!" Applejack interrupted, drawing Rainbow's attention. "Stop. Think about it." She said, and continued as the pegasus looked at her blankly. "Think about the situation. You could probably use a pony of her profession right now. Heck," She added, pressing the point. "We both could. Ah think we've hurt each other enough in the last few days by tryin' to do this on our own..."

Rainbow glanced between Applejack and Doctor Saddlebags. "But I... She..." She said, before closing her eyes and sighing. "Oh for Pete's sake... Fine." She muttered, still dubious at the prospect.

"I take it then you would like her to stay, Miss Dash?" The medical mare asked. Rainbow blushed, and simply placed a hoof on Applejack's own, staring at the doctor as if to dare her to comment. The latter simply raised an eyebrow, and forged ahead. "So, tell me about the crash. What happened? A problem with the glider?"

Rainbow shook her head. "No... I... I think I just pushed it too hard. I'd just bought it. But those tricks are- … were effortless with my wings."

"I see. I assume you'd had glider training, and just got your own?"

"Uh, not really..." Rainbow admitted, having the decency to look ashamed. "I didn't think I'd needed any training. Pegasus, ya know?"

"Speakin' of that." Applejack interrupted, unable to hold on to her curiosity any longer. "Ah've seen you walk off being hit by rocks, crashin' into a library, and demolishin' my barn without a scratch on you." She said, listing off Rainbow's various feats. "You even healed a broken wing in just one day. What makes this crash different?"

Rainbow shrugged. "I dunno. I once asked Twi' about that, she said something about 'Pegasus Protection Magic' or something weird. The same thing that lets us walk on clouds protects us while flying." She shook her head in confusion. "I don't really remember. All I know is that she started talking about wanting to do tests on me." She said, giving a slight shudder. "I got out of there before she started poking me with things. She's scary when she gets all sciency on you, ya know?" She said, to which Applejack nodded.

"Back to the issue at hoof," Doctor Saddlebags ventured, interrupting the two. "I think I see what might have caused the crash. Let me ask you: are you feeling frustrated?" She asked, having a good idea of what was going on.

Rainbow blinked, having not expected such a direct question. "I... guess. It hasn't been easy not being able to fly... I just had to do something!"

Doctor Saddlebags nodded, Rainbow's response having confirmed her suspicions. Aggravated Cutie Mark Failure Syndrome: When ponies found themselves unable to live up to their special talent, they often had quite adverse reactions. And when, as in this case, they lost the relevant ability entirely, due to injury for instance, it was even worse. "I've been briefed on your... situation." The doctor added, pointing towards Applejack, or rather the wings on her back. "It has been a few weeks, I believe?" She asked, to which the other two nodded. "Frankly, I am amazed that you haven't done anything more drastic, Miss Dash. Most ponies unable to fulfill their talent are more... at risk as time goes on. Days is standard, weeks is... extremely rare, if not unheard of." She stated, a sliver of admiration in her voice. "Care to share your secret?"

Rainbow shook her head, still trying to understand the repercussions of what she had just heard. In hindsight, the last few weeks now made sense. "I don't know, Doc..." She said, then glanced at Applejack. "I think it just had to do with having a lot of support." She added, grinning. Applejack smiled in return.

"Well then, do you know what might have brought this on?" Doctor Saddlebags asked, pointing at Rainbow's injured hoof. "Weeks go by, then suddenly this happens?"

Rainbow's expression soured as the conversation tread into uncomfortable territory. She remained silent, not looking at either pony, until she felt her hoof being squeezed by another. She glanced at Applejack, giving a slight nod in thanks. "I lost that support, Doc. Made me do stupid things."

The doctor nodded, making mental notes. "May I ask what caused the loss?"

Rainbow glanced at Applejack again, a guilty look on her face. "I... we kinda fought."

"'Kinda'?" Doctor Saddlebags repeated, hoping for a clarification.

"We almost came to blows, Sugarcube." Applejack said, looking and feeling as guilty as the pegasus did. What she hadn't expected were the tears glistening in the corners of Rainbow's eyes.

"I'm sorry, Applejack!" Rainbow cried out, staring at the covers, unable to meet Applejack's eyes. "I was drunk and feeling horrible... Oh Celestia, I'm a stupid foal..." She squeezed her eyes shut. "I know how drinking makes me act... and I still did it." She lifted her head to stare at Applejack, a desperate note in her voice. "It's all my fault..."

Applejack shook her head, feeling tears in her own eyes. "Ah said some mighty awful things too, Dash. Ah'm just as much at fault as you."

The doctor held up a hoof, getting the attention of the distraught ponies. "Laying the blame... or taking it, as the case may be, is not the issue here. I'd like to know how you felt after the fight, if that isn't too much to ask."

Applejack took the lead, wanting to give Rainbow a bit more time to collect herself. "Ah didn't really blame you, Dash. Not after Ah'd had a chance to sleep on it. Ah knew you weren't yourself. But ya did start that fight. If you'd come to me and said it was the drink makin' you say things you didn't mean, Ah'd've accepted that, and apologised - Ah'd said some pretty unfair things back."

Dash shook her head. "Oh, AJ... I knew I owed you an apology. But the way I saw it... I was drunk, you weren't." She said, her ears drooping. "I felt like, why should I apologise when I had an excuse, if you weren't going to when you didn't?" She gave a quiet, hollow laugh. "It was pretty stupid, looking back, but it was kinda like a point of honour or something."

Doctor Saddlebags nodded, feeling they had finally discovered the nub of the issue. "So you both knew that you were wrong to have said what you did, but felt that the other was was to blame for the fight? And that it was their responsibility to apologise first?"

Applejack nodded. "That's exactly it. It was really dumb... Refusin' to apologise 'till the other did?" She shook her head in exasperation at the whole situation, and raised a hoof in frustration. "What are we, schoolfillies? Ah'm sorry, Rainbow. Not just for the fight, but for not apologisin' sooner. Even if Ah did feel like that, Ah should've just sucked it up and said it first. Then maybe you wouldn't have gotten into this mess." Applejack said, leaning forward to give Rainbow an apologetic nuzzle.

Rainbow smiled as Applejack pressed against her. "No, it's my fault too. I'm supposed to be the spirit of Loyalty, and I couldn't even put making up with my best friend over... trying to make a point? I'm sorry, Applejack. Really." She said, returning the nuzzle. She then briefly leaned back, staring into Applejack's eyes, and slowly leaned forward to kiss her mare.

A quiet cough interrupted them, reminding the two that they were not alone. They both blushed fiercely, feeling mortified, as the doctor kept talking. "Yes, well, I think that topic has been covered enough." She said, the vaguest hint of color on her own cheeks. "Moving on. You've had quite a large amount of visitors, Miss Dash. I assume these are all your friends? Have there been any issues with them lately?"

Rainbow shook her head. "No... Fluttershy has been great, she's been nicer to me than I deserve. She took me in after the fight. I should really thank her for that..." She said, smiling at the nodding Applejack. "I haven't seen much of Rarity lately. Pinkie... kinda tried to push us together. And we yelled at her for that." She grinned sheepishly. "Gotta apologize to her too." Rainbow paused as she considered the last pony on her list. "And Twilight... I guess I was kinda mad at her. I asked her to help me fly but she refused." She said, shaking her head. "I know she meant it well and didn't want to screw me up more but... it still hurt, you know?"

"I see. But you didn't fight with them, then?"

"No... I don't think it would have been the same, Doc." Rainbow answered. "I know they'd take me in in an instant, but... Fluttershy's place is too relaxing, I'd be bouncing off the walls if I stayed there too long. I'd probably get bored at Twi's... And staying with Pinkie or Rarity would probably drive me insane." She said, giving a small laugh.

"You'd probably get right back to prankin' with Pinkie." Applejack suggested, grinning. "Ah haven't seen you do that in a while."

"I... didn't really feel like it, AJ."

Doctor Saddlebags nodded in understanding. "I think that's understandable. You felt the need to keep your friends close, and didn't want to push them away with a prank that went too far, so you just didn't prank at all. Even if you knew, intellectually, that they wouldn't hold it against you, you felt vulnerable."

Rainbow Dash and Applejack just stared at the doctor, until the farmpony let out a small chortle. "And that's what makes her a psychologist, Dash. She's good!" She paused to think as the doctor nodded in thanks. "So wait. She tried pranking me earlier... what does that mean, Doc?" Applejack asked.

"Trust. She feels safe enough with you to do so." The doctor answered, smiling. "Well, it sounds like my concerns are all cleared up. You've got an excellent safety net, Miss Dash." She said, giving Applejack a significant look. "Just don't throw yourself off of it again and you should be fine until your situation gets reversed."

Rainbow, however, didn't look convinced. "But Doc... what if this is permanent?" She asked, seeming to shrink into herself.

Doctor Saddlebags dipped her head in acknowledgment of the possibility. "Then I suggest you make a weekly appointment. The long-term fallout of such a change isn't something I can help you handle now, or even in a single session." She answered, smiling. "You can get my contact details at the front desk." She turned to leave, but caught sight of Rainbow's expression. "Yes? Is there anything else?"

"Um... should Applejack come with me if I do this?"

"If you want." The doctor answered, shrugging. "It's up to you whether you think it will help or not. I should mention, I'm not a relationship counselor though - the only advice I can give there is just to go with the flow, but to be honest and loyal to each other." With no further questions forthcoming, she nodded to the pair, and bade them farewell.

The couple stared at where Doctor Saddlebags had been, then looked at each other for a few moments before bursting into laughter. Once their breathing had settled back to something resembling normalcy, they shared a knowing grin. "Honest and loyal, eh?" Applejack said, chuckling. "Ah think we've got that covered."

Rainbow nodded, giggling at the thought. "No kidding!" She said, her smile fading as her thoughts sobered her mood. "Do we, though, AJ?"

Applejack's own grin faded, sensing the seriousness of Rainbow's question. "What d'you mean, Dash?"

"I mean... us." Rainbow answered, looking straight at Applejack. "All this is kinda... sudden." She grinned, attempting to hide her fears. "Don't get me wrong, this is awesome, and I don't want it to stop..." She said, hesitating once again. "But... it came right after a huge fight."

"Rainbow..." Applejack said, placing a hoof on Dash's.

"I'm scared, AJ. I don't want that to happen again..."

"Dash. Dashie. Listen to me." Applejack scooted closer to Rainbow, the use of the nickname getting the pegasus' attention. "Yeah, we fought. And yeah, it was pretty nasty. But... it turned out okay, didn't it?" She said, nuzzling Rainbow's neck.

Rainbow smiled at the feeling of Applejack's coat against her own. "It did..." She mumbled. "I just don't want to lose this."

Applejack pulled back, staring hard into Rainbow's eyes. "Y'wont, if Ah have anything to say about it."

Rainbow nodded, smiling as her eyes took in all of Applejack. She leaned closer, closing her eyes in anticipation of sharing a kiss, when a loud thump in the corridor interrupted her thoughts. "Oh for Pete's sake... will you ponies stop interrup- Twilight!" Rainbow gasped, as she noticed the new arrival.

"Are you alright, Sugarcube?" Applejack asked, moving off of the bed. She rushed over to the unicorn's side, and helped her up. "What happened to you?

"Yeah, you look worse than I do!" Rainbow added, having crawled to the edge of the bed for a better view.

"I'm okay... Thanks, Applejack." Twilight said, having been lifted back to her hooves. "But if a Princess ever offers you a lift?" She said, and gave a shudder. "... Close your eyes."

"Princess? Lift? Where've you been?" Applejack asked the still woozy pony.

"Canterlot, but I came as soon as I heard!" Twilight replied. "Are you okay Rainbow?"

Rainbow nodded, waving Twilight's worries away with her good hoof. "Nothing a little stay at the hospital won't cure."

"Oh thank goodness..." Twilight breathed, relief flooding through her body. She grinned at Rainbow, knowing how to cheer up the pegasus. "I'll bring you some books if you want."

Rainbow nodded eagerly, beaming. "Sure! Thanks Twi!"

"It's the least I could do for not coming sooner!" She said, then blinked as she realized just who the two ponies sharing the room with her were. "Hey... you two are acting different." She noted, her eyes narrowing in suspicion as she smirked.

"You kinda missed a bit... or a lot." Applejack said, scratching the back of her head with a hoof. "In fact, you just missed some psychologist talkin' to Dash..." She said, glancing at the pegasus before amending her statement. "Talkin' to us."

"Oh, that's who helped me up the stairs..." Twilight mumbled, before brightening. "What did she say? I've always been fascinated by the profession!" She asked, briefly wondering why her friends looked so hesitant. Realization struck, making her want to hit herself for asking the question. "I'm sorry. Doctor-Patient confidentiality. It's completely insensitive of me to ask you that..." Good going, Twilight. She thought, thinking of a situation she had messed up not too long ago. You just can't keep your mouth shut, can you?

Rainbow glanced at Applejack, who had turned to look at her in turn. She hated seeing Twilight beat herself up over this. "Don't worry, Egghead... it's no big deal." She grinned. "I'm gonna go talk with them, see if she can help with... this." She said, nodding her head towards her back.

"Huh?" Twilight asked, not sure of what she was hearing. What is she talking about?

Applejack nodded, agreeing with Rainbow. "Don't you worry about it, Sugarcube. Ah'm startin' to get used to this anyway."

"What?" Twilight asked again. Neither of them are making any sense!

Applejack frowned at Twilight, not understanding why the unicorn seemed so confused. "Y'know. Since it doesn't look like you'll be solvin' this any time soon..." She started, looking at Rainbow. It affected her more.

Rainbow nodded, catching Applejack's look. "She's gonna help me deal with... not having wings anymore." She said, her voice catching in her throat.

Everything clicked into place as Twilight listened to the pair. They think that I... "Wait." She said, holding up a hoof. "Didn't you get my note?"

Applejack looked at Rainbow, who just shrugged, then turned back to Twilight. "What note?"

"The one I left on my door?" Twilight asked. "Saying I was going to Canterlot to do some research?"

"Ah didn't see it, no..." Applejack replied, shaking her head.

"Oh." Twilight replied, nonplussed. "Well then. I went to Canterlot to get some help from Princess Celestia. It was tiring, but we did it, girls!" She said, beaming at her friends.

"Did what?" Rainbow asked, her brows knitted in frustration. What on earth was Twilight going on about?

"I figured it out, Rainbow!" Twilight said, almost bouncing in place.

"Figured what out, Sugarcube?" Applejack asked, just as confused as the pegasus.

Twilight, unable to contain herself, jumped up, her hooves on the edge of Rainbow's bed. "I figured out how to fix the problem!"

"What problem? Spit it out already!" Rainbow said, annoyed at how cryptic Twilight was being.

"Your wings, Dash!" Twilight replied, grabbing Rainbow's head in her hooves. "I figured out how to get your wings back!"
And chapter 13.

This chapter as a whole turned out to be around 12600 words. 2.5 times as much as the previous largest (4400), and nearly a THIRD as large as the entire fic itself.

What the hell, self XD

As you can see, :iconratofdrawn: made the preview image. Now you get to start this chapter with a d'awww induced heart attack!


Lastly: I am trying to get featured on fimficion.net . Once you are done here, if you could find it in your heart to have a gander at the chapters there, it would help me get to that featured sport :) I think we can make it happen.

Thanks again for reading, and I hope you enjoy these chapters ;)

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TriforceoftheGods Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
Is it necessary to comment here even though I already commented on Fimfiction? Oh, I guess I did anyway.
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Tchernobyl Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
Yay :D
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WillPSherman Featured By Owner May 15, 2012
Finally read the three chapters! Good job!

I have to flinch a bit at the psychologist part. It was okay... but if you ever need to bring up the character again, talk to me. We don't really ask a certain type of questions. ^^

Either way, cool! Will we get an epilogue as well?
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Tchernobyl Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
Send me a note! I'm always up for some feedback. I doubt I'll bring her back, but I'd rather go back and fix the chapter to be as good as possible ;)

As for epilogue, dunno. Not sure what i'm doing with the rest yet ;)
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Babileilei Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very cute! Thought the psychologist part was a little be too much re-iteration, but RD playing a joke on AJ was cute. Plus - geesh, Twilight, you could have told them sooner! Anyways, did you end up getting featured? How have you not been featured, yet?

Well, can't think of what else to say but Happy Writing!
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Tchernobyl Featured By Owner May 15, 2012
The psychologist part felt nescessary. Yeah, it's reiteration, but it's for a pony who doesn't know all the details... and they're drawing out details for not only the doctor, but each other to see. Kinda nescessary :)

Sadly, I think i was 1 or 2 ranks away from being featured, but a bunch of this new meta 1 shot fics on fimfic, or some other silly one shots took the spots :/

Shipping is apparently not as popular as other stuff! :P
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Babileilei Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, that really sucks. At least you were close, and you know your story is better than the crack fiction that makes it to featured. Those stories go for shock value while your story has substance ^_~ And shipping stories - well, people have their preferred ships, so it's a more limited audience. Anyways, keep up the good work!
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stoephu Featured By Owner May 12, 2012
This three parts were just amazing, hope to see more soon^^
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Tchernobyl Featured By Owner May 12, 2012
Thank you! Not sure when I'll get to that, I must admit :P
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BetaPony Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You made my night with these 3 chapters! :D Read them all on FimFiction to help you hopefully get featured! In fact.. I reread chapters 1-10 xD I must say, I love this fanfiction so much. It's one of my absolute favorite stories! You. Are. Awesome! :D
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